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A lovers Thoughts
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A lovers Thoughts |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
When I think of you I see moonlit nights Soft sandy beaches Oceans kissed by starlight When I think of you I feel raindrops sweet and warm Snowflakes light as a lovers caress Wind rushing through my heart When I think of you I taste honey sweet and sticky Fine wine warm and intoxicating Strawberries tart and tender When I think of you I feel you in every part of my body In every piece of my soul In every room of my heart When I think of you |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very good writing here.....too feel like this for someone is a true blessing, tell me your secret please! where do you find someone like this?????  Great work!!!< !signature-->Julie  [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 06-30-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Julie...I am still looking myself...this is my dream lover... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Nice Images, Me thinks me shall go think for awhile. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jamie....if you are thinking then this served a purpose.... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful!!! A wonderful fantasy! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautiful thoughts. Only love can make us feel this way and see the world in a new beautiful light. One of your best poems to date, my friendTake care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Lovely 'lovers thoughts'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Nice writing...if you can conjour these feelings from your soul...the right person is out there for you...the most important feeling to remember, in you own words: When I think of you I feel you in every part of my body In every piece of my soul In every room of my heart thats the way it should be...never settle for less...you deserve to feel as loved equal to the amount you love. Love one another-let God do the worrying, Rodney |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ESP...fantasies keep us going...thanks Melissa...you always make me feel good abt my writing thank you Marge...thoughts and dreams what more is there? Rodney...well I'm hoping he is out there |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Paula, beautiful piece!!!! I wonder... this dream lover; have you imagined? Well let me know. I am right now. Loved this one. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mark...I think I've found him...and I think you know |
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