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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Tired I'm corroding from the inside out blacken by the flames that you ignated that day when you called to say your sorry "I've slepted with another man." "Baby, baby why?" I cried silently Why....... I feel my throat clog with pain. "Hello" you speel, "are you ok?" Silent I remain.... Am I ok? My mind rushes, and my eye roll back I tremble in greif as if I had lost myself "I'm sorry" as you start too cry "I'm so sorry...." How shallow those words were as they slithered down my spin. I should have hung up the phone leaving you stand all alone. The silence still haunts me as I lay at night so tired tired of the guilt, tired of the pain, too tired to ever forgive you. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
It hurts to read something like this...I can't imagine what it would be like to write about this subject...I am so sorry for your pain, Daniel, and I don't blame you for not wanting to forgive. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
This is a wonderful piece that shows real heart Daniel. But it could use some cleaning up in the spelling etc..perhaps an edit? I do love the potential of it. It is a story that bears telling. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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