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slipknot
Junior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 25


0 posted 2000-06-29 03:33 AM


I'm the only one left
everyone else has moved on
they all got girls
my whole life has been a con
now I'm really alone
no friends to call my own
you took him away
the last one left
now he sits at your throne
somebody kill me please
where did that brick wall go
I'll hit it doing about a buck twenty
it's to damn bad
nobody will be there to say no.


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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-06-29 06:29 AM


well, you didn't figure on me...hit the brakes baby...sometimes it's enough to just stand still...here if ya need an ear...
angelswing
Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
2 posted 2000-06-29 09:17 AM


Join the club mate, life always finds a way, and I can see your angle, you just have to live with it, I loved the poem very much, Thanks for putting it up .
L.of.l. Tom .


Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

Enola
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138
England
3 posted 2000-06-29 10:18 AM


I saw the name and thought, 'this is going to be good', and it was, more than good in fact.  I feel the same way a lot of the time, like every one around me is able to mature and move on with their lives while I'm still stuck in the same rut:

"my whole life has been a con
now I'm really alone
no friends to call my own"

I really like this poem, because it speaks volumes to me.  


The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.


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