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Daniel_vv
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since 2000-06-28
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0 posted 2000-06-29 12:32 PM


Human Ways

Take my tiredness,
elope it with the light,
for the dawning of acceptance,
can only be bruised & broken.

The night is molded by the folds,
as the angels decend,
for there daily plunder,
the dying smile to see there end.

Am I alive to sleep,
do I sleep to feel alive,
I am so human,
that my skin is bleeched,
and my arms broken,
for what I need to say,
forgive me for my human ways.


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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-06-29 12:50 PM


Take my tiredness,
elope it with the light,
for the dawning of acceptance,
can only be bruised & broken.

The night is molded by the folds,
as the angels decend,
for there daily plunder,
the dying smile to see there end.
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wow...you have some amazing imagery in this
very well written and expressed emotions as well.
Welcome to passions Daniel,
so very nice to meet you
take care,
jm



you can say baby
baby can I hold you tonite
maybe if I said the right words
at the right time
you'd be mine
baby can I hold you tonite

Tracy C

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