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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Banished. Oh how empty and thin the air has been, love feels distant like the angels, smiles linger like a disguised memory, and I am banished from gods hands. The shadows stalk me like the morning; if a sea of sorrow exists then I must be drowning three feet deep because I miss her her lying heart. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Daniel_w~ Welcome! Excellent first post, and a great entry for the book! *vote*  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
that last line came from out of nowhere. Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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LittleCookie Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 55asheville,NC,UnitedStates |
I know how it feels to miss someone that you really shouldn't miss!Great entrance!Look forward to reading more! :*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
As I read I thought, sweet poem..then bam! you hit with the last line..yes..we do sometimes miss that kind of person.  |
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