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When Paths Cross. . . /Co-written with Marina. . .
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When Paths Cross. . . /Co-written with Marina. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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She knows he's out there somewhere So she'll send up one last prayer To the one who enters her dream each night Created on the pages that she writes He wondered where he would find her heart He really had no idea of where he should start It seemed for years he had sung the same song To find the one for which his heart longed Another day, not knowing what it will bring Perhaps today, they will find that one true thing A love worth having, they'll pay any cost To know it at that very minute....when paths cross --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well done guys your words blend well together can hardly tell who's is who's!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
WOW Great job you two Ain't fun to write together, feeding off each others thoughts? Glad to see Lone Wolf and I aren't the only ones who know how fun it can be All my love, Jeffrey |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A great job of expressing uncertainty. Like it a lot jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You two are so sweet!!! (yes Marina..you too...ROFL...just kidding girl, you know I wuv you!!) For two of my very best friends...I hope you both find the happiness that I KNOW you deserve!! Big hugs guys..this was great!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Poetic Duets!!! Dynamic Duos!!! Like Batman and Robin....good one..now if I could find someone who'd want to write with me.....(sigh).. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well all I have to say is ... WHAT TOOK YOU TWO SO LONG!!!! Well, thats not ALL i have to say.... how about PERFECT AWESOME EXCELLENT... AND HOW ABOUT MORE MORE MORE  wonderful work from two of my favs later-duet-gators jm |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
HoTTdAMM Sven, this one has left me in awe I adore this one  Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thanks to everyone!!!!!!! But mostly I need to thank Sven who convinced me to do it. OK....OK....you were right it was fun and we do make a pretty good team. I think! LOL Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hey great duet, lets see more... parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I do hope you mean poetry????? LOL |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Ah.... dah..lol |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
This was beautifully put together by you two. Would love to see more. Loved it! kat |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . this was fun to do. . . and I didn't have to twist Marina's arm that much!! I was right wasn't I Marina?? And Parker, I don't know if there will be more. . . you'll just have to wait like everyone else. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Yes!! There are you happy now??? LOL Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Great team work guys. wonderful poem. "monuments put from pen to paper turns me into a gutless wonder" Manic street preachers |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes I am Marina. . . thank you!!! --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Brian, since Sven obviously has lost his manners........thank you. WE are glad you liked it. Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I haven't lost my manners Marina. . . just misplaced them!! And besides, I posted this poem, and that makes the job of thanking everyone yours!!! Thank you Brian. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Excuse me?????? I signed on to writing a verse here.......that's all!!!!! Your post........your party!!!!! Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Pardon me?? I thought that WE wrote this poem!! So, therefore WE share the duties!! LOL -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I write......you post!!!!! LOL It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
EXCELLENT!!! *CLAPPING* This was absolutely wonderful you two! Two of my favorites cowriting together, what could be better?! Keep up the great work! Love yas Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
You two combined are a wonderful treat!! Great poem...enjoyed it muchly! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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