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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 2000-06-28 10:21 PM


What will the future bring
Will I cry or will I sing
There could be so much more
If I unlock the door
Have to look deep inside
Let hope be the guide

She will show me the way
Can't look back to yesterday
Have to focus on what's ahead
A whole new life can now be led
Where I will go from here
Time to face my fear

Out of dark will come light
It'll show which way is right
The path will now unfold
Could be paved with gold
Just have to pass the test
To put all fears to rest

Now I can truly see
There's no limit to what I can be
This is my chance to show
All that I do indeed know
So many things to learn
A million directions in which to turn

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Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth


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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-06-28 10:28 PM


A million directions indeed Jenn, Happy that you can see a hope in tomorrow?

Very well expressed emotions in this one

Catch you later

All my love,
Jeffrey


Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2000-06-28 10:36 PM


Yes, Jeffrey, a million and I can see them unfolding.  Thank you very much m'friend.  

Oh no, I'll catch YOU later!!  ROFLMAO


Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth

Jamie
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3 posted 2000-06-28 10:45 PM


A new day brings opportunity anew.
Great poem of hope.
jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2000-06-28 10:47 PM


Jamie,

Thank you very much for the sweet reply.  Yes, new hope comes every day.  

LW


Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth

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5 posted 2000-06-28 10:49 PM


LoneWolf~
So glad to see you focused on the hope.
Love your thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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6 posted 2000-06-29 01:17 AM


Umm....In that case maybe I should slow down and wait for you   LOL

All my love,
Jeffrey


Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2000-06-29 09:52 PM


Marge~
Yes, I am focused on the hope.  Thank you, I love your thoughts too.  

Jeffrey~
Really??  Wow . . .wait a minute . . . do you want to be caught??  That's no fun!!  LOL




Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth

SpitFire
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8 posted 2000-06-29 09:56 PM


~LW,...this IS your chance. It's all you.  Make it the best it can be. A million options to let yourself shine. Love to hear this positivity.  Huge squeeze for you. haha. Take care. *Peace.
Lone Wolf
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9 posted 2000-06-30 10:06 PM


SF . . . Believe me, I know!!  Could be yours too, my friend.  It will happen, please believe.  I knew you'd love it!!  
Huge hug right back at ya!!  You take care too.

LW


Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth

CocoBaci
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10 posted 2000-07-01 12:35 PM


Once again I pass your way
Had to take a peak at this one
Am glad I did it's writing well done!

Coco

Jeremiah Johnson
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11 posted 2000-07-01 03:49 AM


great expression and very to the point which path will you choose and will you stay on it or fall off great piece love it.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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12 posted 2000-07-01 09:23 AM


Wonderful, positive and uplifting ... terrific writing Lone Wolf!  Just what I needed to start my day ... thanks!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lone Wolf
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13 posted 2000-07-02 12:02 PM


Coco . . . Thanks for stopping by!!  

Jeremiah . . . Thank you, the choice is ours to make.  Do not plan to fall!!  

Kit . . . Happy to get your day off to a positive start.  Thanks!  




Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth

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