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Mirrors of Our Souls
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Mirrors of Our Souls |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada 
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Mirrors of Our Souls Each time I look into your eyes, I ponder what I see, For there, deep in the heart of you, I view my destiny. ‘Tis more a feeling deep and strong, An intuition dear, That we have met so long before, Where passions drew us near. So much it seems like deja-vue, Have I been here before? Deep in your heart, entwined in this, Yet in the days of yore? Was I the princess, you the prince, Of days so long ago? Was I the maiden fair, whose heart Her knight did come to know? Or could it be, sweet Romeo, And I his Juliet, A hundred years or more ago, ‘Twas when our hearts first met? Perhaps it was a battlefield, And I, your Nightingale ... Could this be how I gaze into Your heart I know so well? What course, this path of destiny, Unfolds beyond our realm, To draw our souls together while Our heartbeats overwhelm. Does fate reveal our paths in this, For simply, after all ... It’s in your eyes, I see reflections; ... Mirrors of our souls. /Kit McCallum |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, I believe we meet those soul friends again and again through many life times. Wonderful poem, Kit! |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Wow! That gave me something to think about...  Great job, wonderful poem!"The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Kit~ This is wonderful ! Really enjoyed it so much. You touched the 'romantic' in me ... My deja vu includes Rhett and Scarlet ... Marge *sighs contentedly* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kit, This was beautiful my friend. It is amazing what you can see in there isn't it? Great writing. LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Kit* Amazing work!! The feelings in this were so beautiful!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
‘Tis more a feeling deep and strong, An intuition dear, That we have met so long before, Where passions drew us near. So much it seems like deja-vue, Have I been here before? Deep in your heart, entwined in this, Yet in the days of yore? ------------ Kit this is so beautiful and it flows so gracefully... I just loved the way it read... perfect ponderings my friend later-reflection-gator  jm you can say baby baby can I hold you tonite maybe if I said the right words at the right time you'd be mine baby can I hold you tonite Tracy C |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, Kit! I love it! Denise |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Martie: Thanks for capturing the essence in this Martie! ~Dawn Eclipse: Glad it had you pondering Dawn Eclipse ... and thank you! ~Marge: Ahhhh Rhett and Scarlet ... romantic indeed, thanks Marge! ~Lone Wolf: The eyes are a powerful window to our souls ... thanks Lone Wolf! ~Butterflies: Thanks so much Butterflies ... was feeling a bit romantic I was! ~Janet Marie: Thanks JM ... big smile here! ~Denise: Thanks so much Denise! Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh wow Kit such beauty in this, so very lovley and a touching, tender masterpiece Well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Oh Kit, This is so lovely, your love for each other shines so sweetly through and through, awesome writting. Love, Cerenity |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Tracie: Thank you so much Tracie, for the wonderful comments! ~Cerenity: Thanks Cerenity ... so very much appreciated. Much appreciation, /Kit |
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