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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Butterflies and Daisies ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wandering along in a lush green meadow, I haven't a care in the world. The sun is warm as it caresses me And dances with the butterflies and daisies. The birds joyously sing their song, Inviting me to warble along. The melody that fills the air Laughs with the butterflies and daisies. The wind whips my hair about my face My cheeks are pink from glee. It pauses in it's rush through the trees And plays with the butterflies and daisies. My heart is filled with serene pleasure, There's a spring in my step as I walk. I think I might stop here a while ... Spend the day with the butterflies and daisies. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~  This is perfectly delightful ! You know how much I enjoy your talent. Keep it going gal ! Sort of reminds me of 'going to the meadow'  I love you ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Very much a serene pleasure to read your poetry.... enjoyed the walk with butterflies and the sight of them daisies... Lizzie, Thank you... regards, sudhir |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This was like a breath of fresh air and I love the way you breathe...flowers and butterflies...sounds like the perfect day to me! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ESP, Me thinks you have spring fever. Enjoyed |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
ESP this is such a pretty poem .. I like this one alot. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
BEAUTIFUL Lizzie... reads like a sweet spring breeze ... lovely images you have drawn for us. perfect. take care, jm you can say baby baby can I hold you tonite maybe if I said the right words at the right time you'd be mine baby can I hold you tonite Tracy C |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
~Marge~- Thanks for being my inspiration...I love you too!! ~Sudhir~- Glad you enjoyed the walk with them butterflies and daisies cos I sure did!! ~Butterflies~ Keep breathing!! Nothing like a breath of fresh air and that's for sure!! ~Seymour~-More like a longing for spring, I think!! Winter is midway thru here!! ~CocoBaci~- Thank you for thinking it pretty...I aim to please!! ~Janet Marie~- What a lovely compliment!!! Thank you so much!!!  Love to you all, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Spend the day with the butterflies and daisies. sounds like the perfect day to me, lovely poem, I can feel the sun warming my face nad the words warming my heart. beautiful. "monuments put from pen to paper turns me into a gutless wonder" Manic street preachers |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful piece, my friend. I love the imagery. Keep up the good work! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
The imagery is perfect, you have quite the talent, and as always your poem is beautiful like "butterflies and daisies" Take Care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This poem makes me smile..it's so fresh, so lovely..hey!! That describes YOU! LOL...  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
~Brian Madden~-I felt it too....but now all I feel is FREEZING COLD!!! LOL.. ~Lovebug~-Very sweet comment...thanks, friend! ~Melissa Honeybee~-Ya think so? Thank you! ~Sharon~- Awwww....how sweet is that? Thank you so much!!! Love to you all, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Such a dreamy delightful poem...you mind if i join you in this soothing dance with nature's beauty...LOL  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lizzie A walk with butterflies and daisies what pure delight you have produced loads of imagery in this and wonderful imagery it is well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Lizzie, a beautiful poem, lovely wonderful images, very summery. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
~Kaile~-Please do come join me....it would be lovely to enjoy your company!! ~Tracie~-Thank you for enjoying my simple imagery! ~Brian Madden~-Nothing like a summers day...even if it is only in my imagination!! Thanks everyone for your kind replies!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Lizzie ... liked this a lot I did! What a wonderful and picturesque morning pick-me-upper ... thank you for the cheery start to my morning! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
Really pretty thoughts to take me to an afternoon stroll in the park. You have married two lovely ideas that go well together. Enjoyed it Shall go watch the butterflies dance upon the daisies ... toodle ! *If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours* |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
What beautiful thoughts you have written here...very vivid. I'd like to spend a day like that  Marie~ |
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