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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Easy now, I understand, the distance in the grasp of hands... Easily, do I forgive, sweetness-- teach me... I might still live... And o that dance of meet of eyes the same one still that is despised, the same one step placed out of time-- I step on toes. I misplace rhyme-- I wish me yours, I wish me, mine... I wish. I wish. I lose my mind... Easy love strawberry wine... see how easy? how we rhyme? simple, simple, simple mine... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Easy now, I understand, the distance in the grasp of hands... Easily, do I forgive, sweetness-- teach me... I might still live... ---------------- I step on toes. I misplace rhyme-- I wish me yours, I wish me, mine... I wish. I wish. I lose my mind... Easy love strawberry wine... see how easy? how we rhyme? simple, simple, simple mine... ----------- ...simply perfect ... ...simply fine ... puts a smile in this simple heart of mine. simple, simple, like my oxygen...your poetic rhyme, 'tis so divine  love this one me twin..so gentle and sweet .. SO YOU ...and thats a good thing ... me loves ya.. me ********* wanna good laugh... was eating an apple and lost a filling.. know any good dentists?  ...WE ARE SCARY!!!  (at least the dentist has the laughing gas) *winkie* *winkie* baby dont you work so hard for this prize you've found, it will all be gone-when you turn around, cause nothing lasts forever anyway. Rick Roberts |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Simply beautiful, serenity, Simply beautiful... regards, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Not so simple, enjoyed the read. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Serenity, this one is sweet!  Coco |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
so sweet, so wonderful, so befuddling sometimes... you capture love well here Serenity Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Serenity~ Simply divine, my dear! Nothing more complicated could ever make a large a mark as this simple rhyme. Lovely!!!! You always leave me impressed! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Love the way you wrote this, Serenity! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thanks to all--wanted to write something a little cheerier--and this really was my answer to the question, "why must you always complicate things?" So there. LOL. thanks again. and Janet Marie---hope you get that tooth fixed soon, so I'll feel better...smiles...me loves ya back. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
this indeed is a cheerful one. kind of stream of consciousness... intriguing no doubt. and i've never had strawberry wine. i'm going to look for that. =) good work, as always. We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ This is really a sweet post. It just likes me ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I'll have to put that on my shopping list Except no one here partakes ... Nice thoughts serenity |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write |
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