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serenity blaze
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0 posted 06-28-2000 03:40 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Easy now, I understand,
the distance
in
the grasp of hands...
Easily, do I forgive,
sweetness--
teach me...
I might still live...

And o that dance
of meet of eyes
the same one still
that is despised,
the same one step
placed out of time--

I step on toes.
I misplace rhyme--
I wish me yours,
I wish me, mine...
I wish.  I wish.
I lose my mind...
Easy love
strawberry wine...

see how easy?
how we rhyme?
simple, simple,
simple mine...

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 06-28-2000 08:23 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Easy now, I understand,
the distance
in
the grasp of hands...
Easily, do I forgive,
sweetness--
teach me...
I might still live...
----------------
I step on toes.
I misplace rhyme--
I wish me yours,
I wish me, mine...
I wish.  I wish.
I lose my mind...
Easy love
strawberry wine...

see how easy?
how we rhyme?
simple, simple,
simple mine...
-----------

...simply perfect ...
...simply fine ...
puts a smile in this simple heart of mine.
simple, simple,
like my oxygen...your poetic rhyme,
'tis so divine  


love this one me twin..so gentle and sweet ..
SO YOU ...and thats a good thing ...
me loves ya..
me
*********
wanna good laugh...
was eating an apple and lost a filling..
know any good dentists?  ...
WE ARE SCARY!!!  
(at least the dentist has the laughing gas)
*winkie* *winkie*


baby dont you work so hard
for this prize you've found,
it will all be gone-when you turn around,
cause nothing lasts forever anyway.
Rick Roberts
Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 06-28-2000 12:45 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Simply beautiful, serenity, Simply beautiful...

regards, sudhir
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 06-28-2000 12:50 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Serenity,
Not so simple, enjoyed the read.
CocoBaci
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4 posted 06-28-2000 12:55 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Serenity, this one is sweet!


Coco
Colin
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5 posted 06-28-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

so sweet, so wonderful, so befuddling sometimes... you capture love well here Serenity  

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.
TerryW
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6 posted 06-28-2000 04:10 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Serenity~
     Simply divine, my dear!  Nothing more complicated could ever make a large a mark as this simple rhyme.  Lovely!!!!   You always leave me impressed!

Love Ya~



~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Martie
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7 posted 06-28-2000 04:12 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Love the way you wrote this, Serenity!
serenity blaze
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8 posted 06-28-2000 07:04 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

thanks to all--wanted to write something a little cheerier--and this really was my answer to the question, "why must you always complicate things?"  So there.  LOL.
thanks again.  and Janet Marie---hope you get that tooth fixed soon, so I'll feel better...smiles...me loves ya back.
Ethan Halo
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9 posted 06-28-2000 07:29 PM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

this indeed is a cheerful one. kind of stream of consciousness... intriguing no doubt. and i've never had strawberry wine. i'm going to look for that. =)
good work, as always.

We all got our demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

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10 posted 06-28-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Serenity~
This is really a sweet post.
It just likes me !  
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Rex Allen McCoy
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11 posted 06-28-2000 08:45 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

I'll have to put that on my shopping list
Except no one here partakes ...
Nice thoughts serenity
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neat write
 
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