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The one
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You are not the one who can touch me with your eyes And cause a fire to start burning in my soul You are not the one, that with just a word, Sends passions soaring to heights before now unreached You are not the one whose laugh, soft and low, Causes shivers of anticipation to run down my spine You are not the one, who with just your presence Makes my world stop spinning, leaving me breathless You are not the one. You cant be the one. Why are you the one? |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Good question, Paula...one that I don't have the answer to but have wondered myself. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
When you find out the answer, send this one to me too!  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
i wish I could find the answer...maybe it would make love easier |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I am the one because it was I who gave the gift of fire. "The One" is not chosen. "The One" is simply born. Of course, I could be wrong....lol jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL Jamie...you are the ONE huh? The question is...are you MY one? |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I can relate...when you love someone who basically does nothing for you...but you love him.....you just don't know why!!! Great writing.....leaves me thinking..  Julie :) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JulieAnn...sometimes we fight the thing we need the most |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
We don't usually pick the one it just happens. Some things are just beyond comprehension. Rich |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Rich...you got that right...just wish it didnt hurt so much never say never |
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