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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-06-28 03:23 AM


Magic Man take me
To another land
A land of purple clouds
And skies of jade
Take me to a place
Far away from here
A place of crystal mountain peaks
A land of amber creeks
Take me to another world
Where I can be free
A land without wars and strife
Where in peace I may live my life
A place hidden away from Man
Untouched by human hands
A place unseen
A place unheard
A place for only me
Lonely you say
I will get
Then bring along my friend
We will start a new world there
Under Gods watchful eye
So take me to a new land please
A place where I can fly!!

Julie :)



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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-06-28 12:29 PM


JulieAnn,
Great writing, lovely thoughts...

Take me to where I would love to be in my dreams,
Take me to my haven, where I could fly free,
Release me into glorious flight with wings, supreme
Take me to the distant horizon as far as I can see...


regards, sudhir.

JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
2 posted 2000-06-28 12:57 PM


Thank you for your reply I wasn't sure abou this one but I write at my computer...no rough drafts first.....what you see is what you get...thanks again.....you are so kind!  

Julie :)



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