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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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0 posted 2000-06-28 03:02 AM


Sometimes things are better left unsaid
words not spoken
left with questions
only answered from the heart
You know the answers
as you wipe away my tears
you heart beat plays a tune
and that's all I need to hear
a decade of lovers games
we knew the end was near
now you're gone
a shadow of our love
lingers in the recesses of my mind
I call out your name in the night
you are not there
the smell of your cologne
is the only thing that remains
to remind me
as I lay my weary head upon your pillow
I fanatize~~~~pretending~~~~~wishing
that things were better than they were
the bad times now absent from my memory
as if they never were
playing with my emotions
false memeories tugging at my heart
tempting me to call
would you answer?
Do i dare?
Can we go back?
Change our minds?
Is it that we enjoy this lovers game?
No....
I must hold fast.....
time has lost
though we thought we had enough
time left us
time couldn't hold our love.....


Julie :)



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1 posted 2000-06-28 07:53 AM


JulieAnn~
I hope your heart finds many happy memories to hold on to.
~*Marge*~



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Jan
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since 2000-06-14
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2 posted 2000-06-28 08:46 AM


I wish your heart a speedy recovery and many happy memories.  
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
3 posted 2000-06-28 10:31 AM


This is full of emotion! You brought them across well! Hope sunny days are around the bend  
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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Michigan
4 posted 2000-06-28 01:09 PM


When we remember it seems as though only the
memories that touch our hearts seem to come
to the surface, the ones that bite at our
souls sink and are hard to reach...I
understand your words and your feelings so
deeply.  I hope you find peace in remembering
and healing in writing, thank you for sharing
this piece~

Denise
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5 posted 2000-06-28 09:56 PM


Very well written, Julie! This is a great expression of longing for what can never be again. It's nice to finally see you too! Great pic!

Denise

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