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Spring Begins Within

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 06-28-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

Daisies sleep 'neath lemon rays
Heads turned towards the sky...
Bathed within the wind's caress
Fledgling dreams do fly...

Lullabies of crystal blue
Harmonize with quiet streams...
Luscious blooms of sweetened rose
Waft on purpled beams...

An angel clad in silvered-white
Carries me on gentle wing...
Enswathed within his tender soul
My spirit softly sings...

September rains we dance within
And lay 'neath winter's cloud...
Caught within each other's arms
No darkness is allowed...

Spring begins at time's consent
But never did it leave our eyes...
For a perfect love between two souls
Never really dies...





*Krista Knutson*

"We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~
© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-28-2000 12:59 AM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Beautiful poem Krista!  
"For a perfect love between two souls
Never really dies..."
Ahh, need I say more?  


Abrahm Simons

"Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon
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2 posted 06-28-2000 07:51 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Spring begins at time's consent
But never did it leave our eyes...
For a perfect love between two souls
Never really dies...

Beautiful indeedy Krista!  


Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

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3 posted 06-28-2000 07:55 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Krista~
If you didn't pen anything else -

'Daisies sleep 'neath lemon rays'

this would have been enough.

How lovely ... how lovely !
~*Marge*~



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Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 06-28-2000 12:43 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

a very beautiful poem from you Krista, lovely words...

regards, sudhir
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5 posted 06-28-2000 12:47 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Such descriptive verses just seemed to trap me right thru this poem I had to read it once again.
~ For a perfect love between 2 souls never dies ~ this was such a sweet ending to a lovely poem.

Coco  
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6 posted 06-28-2000 12:54 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Alwye,
This one caught my eye and made me fly.
Dawn Eclipse
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7 posted 06-28-2000 06:04 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Wow Krissa..
that was a beautiful poem... It caught me, and held my attention there... wonderful job.  

"The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper."
Eden Phillpotts
*Cassandra Roseen*
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8 posted 06-28-2000 09:53 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wow!!! Now this is a great poem! I love that last verse..gosh!  
Janet Marie
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9 posted 06-28-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

there you go wafting again...
and making it look so dang easy too...
LOVE THOSE LEMON RAYS!!!
(silly me ... I just call it sunshine)  
also call it LIME GREEN ENVY!!!
(kidding just kiding)
boy am I glad me muse aint here to see this one...
she couldnt take it LOL
perfect K AGAIN...dang it LOL
later-wafting-gator
jm

you can say baby
baby can I hold you tonite
maybe if I said the right words
at the right time
you'd be mine
baby can I hold you tonite

Tracy C
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Abrahm- No sweetheart, you needn't say more.   Thank you so much for your kind words.  Love you much.  

Maree- Thank you so much hon!

Marge- Thanks for your reply, I really appreciate it.  

Sudhir- Why thank you.

Coco- I'm glad you enjoyed.  

Seymour- I'm glad it caught your eye, for very hard I tried.  

Cassers- I'm happy you liked it sweetie girl.  

Poet deVine- Thank you!  I'm glad you liked the last verse, I'm proud of it.  

JM- Well you can thank a certian Dusk Treader for making my words waft...tis amazing what love can do for ya.  Thanks for your reply, it's always an honor to have you read my stuff.  


*Krista Knutson*

"We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~
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beautiful
 
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