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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This Angel Too many times this angel has fallen. I can not resist when love starts callin'. It's a sad thing, but this heart has learned. It no longer wishes to reach out and get burned. So many hold me, but they know from the start. Though I wish it were different, I have warm hands and a cold heart. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
We see so many here that sail that same boat ... so sad that some have to sail against the wind watching others sailing with it nicely done Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Perhaps I am lucky after all, insofar as mine is only once destroyed. at least you tried again nice jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
TA I really love thsi poems emotions sincere and honest... I relate as well... though I will always be drawn to the flame.. I guess the fire is worth getting burned.. take care, jm you can say baby baby can I hold you tonite maybe if I said the right words at the right time you'd be mine baby can I hold you tonite Tracy C |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May your warm hands clasp your mind and try love again another time when your heart then begins to sing listen to your mind so no red flag goes 'ker-ching!' Good luck next time around, TA!< !signature--> Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ I'm gonna be around to see when someone picks up the pieces ... and you let them ! Smile !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Even the coldest of hearts still have embers that glow deep inside. Nice work! < !signature--> God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 06-30-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
love the ending here...the willingness to try one's hand at love again despite his many disappointments....like the subtle implication here |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
A sincere expressions of pain, Here's hoping you try again! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I really enjoyed this Tennessee Angel! So open and honestly expressed, really well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I think you have a warm heart. It's evident in the way you express yourself. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
You're responses are all so kind. Everyone has been so good to me here. This little verse came out a little more depressing than I had intended. I haven't given up on love or anything crazy like that. I'm still patiently waiting. ethome -- Thank you for such a lovely comment. It meant a lot. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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