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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2000-06-27 09:58 PM



You're  back  my  Love
~~~


A  glowing  fire  sets  the  mood
that  burns  within  my  veins
I've  dreamt  of  you
a  thousand  times
and  at  last  you're  here  again
~
Its'  gentle  flicker
cascades  softly
on  beauty
none  can  compare
Your  gentle  voice
inviting  me
your  perfume  thrills  the  air
~
The  moment  I've  been  waiting  for
now  time
has  drained  its'  sands
We  drift  a  little  closer
I  can  feel  you  in  my  hands
~
My  temples  pound
I  cannot  breathe
your  lips
I  press  to  mine
~
I  shed  a  tear
as  I  drain  your  soul
a  smoother  beer
I  shall  never  find
~~~



© Copyright 2000 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-06-27 10:00 PM


Jeez! Now, THAT is a surprise ending! LOL Very cute, Rex!

hehehehehehehehe

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



Jamie
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2 posted 2000-06-27 10:04 PM


You're not getting my Budlite Rex!
fun stuff.
jamie

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2000-06-27 10:10 PM


hehehe very cute and funny   enjoyed!< !signature-->

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"



[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 06-27-2000).]

SpitFire
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4 posted 2000-06-27 10:41 PM


~Haha,...this is Awesome!!!  I love it.  You had me fooled all the way to the end. haha. Thanks. *Peace.
WhtDove
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5 posted 2000-06-27 10:48 PM


ROFL! You nut, not what I thought it would be! LOL a bit decieving there isn't it? I got a good laugh out of this one, so typically menish.    Good one REX!
Denise
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6 posted 2000-06-27 10:52 PM


ROFL........Oh my, I think this was your best surprise ending ever!  

Denise

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
7 posted 2000-06-28 08:36 PM


thanks Elizabeth ... happy to make you smile

jamie ... can I just hold it for a minute?

Dark Angel ... thankyou

SpitFire ... got yuh

WhtDove ...
Denise ... perhaps ...  

Denise
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8 posted 2000-07-10 10:43 PM


hehehehe....can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve next!  

Denise

tracie66
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9 posted 2000-07-23 08:10 PM


Rex~
WOW I was just cruizen and look what I found   great poem dear Rex..I enjoyed it
thanks
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Sunshine
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10 posted 2000-07-23 09:09 PM


I wasn't even looking and fell right in...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
11 posted 2000-07-23 10:02 PM


Denise ... might not be too exciting

Tracie ... you must have went a ways back for this ... thanks for the kind reply

Sunny ... watch that first step
thanks for reading

MMoonchild
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12 posted 2000-07-23 11:57 PM


this was really cute..you sure have a wonderful sense of humor
~~soft smiles Rex
Maureen

Paula Finn
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13 posted 2000-07-24 01:05 AM


Woohoo pop-a-top for me there Rex...OMG this is just too too funny...especially with your "lovely" friend right at the top of the page.

never say never

Kit McCallum
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14 posted 2000-07-30 10:16 AM


    

LOL!
Loved this Rex!!!

    

I'm playing catch-up today ... couldn't miss this gem ... back to the top you go!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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