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Brian K New Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 2 |
Is it really greener on the other side Too much to lose, nowhere to hide Reaching within to find the way It is there the answers will come to pray Looking both ways to cross the street Not noticing the trolley I am about to meet The screams I hear seem so far away My screams, My fear, echoing the day Traveling back to forge ahead Laughter of images forgotten not dead I stop and wonder if it is true what is said Is it really greener on the other side |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hi Brian nice to see another post from you... I like this poem...a little on the cryptic side which is cool and great rhyme flow... I really like the thoughts behind the last verse. take care, jm baby dont you work so hard for this prize you've found, it will all be gone-when you turn around, cause nothing lasts forever anyway. Rick Roberts |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's not greener on the other side. You have to water this side to make it green yourself!!  |
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