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You Stole My Heart

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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 06-27-2000 08:35 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal


You Stole My Heart
~*Marge Tindal*~

You stole my heart
with just your smile
You took it
You kept it
all this while

It's not that I miss it
but I'd just like to know
do you intend to give it back
or is it yours forever ?

It beats just for you
So keep it if you must
The heart that you stole
beats only with your trust

Trust that you will keep it
safely from all harm
Tucked within your very own heart
covered with your charm

So, trusting that you like it
not questioning why
I won't even turn you in
to the F.B.I.




© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-27-2000 08:56 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Marge--can't say I blame the culprit--you are irresistable---cute, and a smile to start my day...thanks...
Jamie
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2 posted 06-27-2000 09:02 AM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

What I read between the lines speaks of the fact there is no crime,
The words almost shout,, you gave it away this time!...

Very Nice!

jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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3 posted 06-27-2000 12:16 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

So cute, Marge...this poem steals my heart, and the last verse made me smile  ...

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!


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4 posted 06-27-2000 12:18 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Lovely, just lovely...

regards, sudhir
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5 posted 06-27-2000 02:09 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Beautiful, Marge!!!
Is this your method of stealing other's hearts? Cos it working!!!!! Your words entwine and wrap themselves around my heart...then ya steal it!! That's the plot, isn't it?!!!  
Love ya!

Love and hugs,
Lil' Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
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6 posted 06-27-2000 05:02 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Marge~
     I love it!   The ending is sooooooo cute!  I caouldn't help but giggle a little.  You do have a way of stealing hearts yourself, my dear!   You got mine!



Love Ya~


~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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So, trusting that you like it
not questioning why
I won't even turn you in
to the F.B.I.

a wonderful poem Marge. Really enjoyed.


"but for the lovers, their arms Round the griefs of the ages, Who pay no praise or wages Nor heed my craft or art"
Dylan Thomas.
ethome
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8 posted 06-27-2000 06:07 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Marge instead of the FBI you turned him in to the IBM and I love it

"You stole my heart
with just your smile
you took it
you kept it
all this while."

Well, Marge you steal my heart everytime you write.
Mark Bohannan
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judging from all the hearts you have stole--
mine included-- it is you who should fear the FBI.  Loved it.
Lone Wolf
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10 posted 06-27-2000 07:47 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Marge~

These lines are awesome my friend.  They just say it all.  The FBI part made me smile, thank you.  Nice writing.  

It beats just for you
So keep it if you must
The heart that you stole
beats only with your trust

*HUGS*
LW


Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth
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11 posted 06-27-2000 07:48 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Marge--If he doesn't take care of your heart, he has me to answer to...your heart is just too precious! Like your poem too
Marge Tindal
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Serenity~
Glad to give you a smile, hon.

Prometheus~
Thank you ... FBI's Most Wanted !  

Elizabeth~
Thank you so much.

Sudhir~
Glad you liked.

Lil' Lizzie~
Yep !  You're just too smart ... figured it out, did you ?  Gotcha' !

TerryW~
Hello, love.  So good to see you back.
Missed you !

Brian~
Hope it gave you a chuckle.

ETHome~
Clever ... You're a sweetie.

MarkB~
Well ... I left a trail of 'fingerprints' all over their hearts ... should be an open and shut case !  

LoneWolf~
You are just the greatest !

Martie~
Grrrrr !
My little protector ... thank you.
Love you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 06-27-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is sweet, Marge! Very nice!  

Denise
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14 posted 06-27-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Marge~ this is CUTE! Loved the F.B.I. bit....CUTE!CUTE!CUTE!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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15 posted 06-27-2000 11:25 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Great to see beautiful poems like this one.
I remember when I first came to Passions in January ... most of the poems here were so sad ... good to see the change ... and your poems have come a long way I think toward helping the mood swing to happen

Rex}>{{{{o>
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16 posted 06-28-2000 12:11 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Marge, this one is delightful and uplifting. Enjoyed it as always.
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17 posted 06-28-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Hell, yea, I stole your heart
I'm holding it for ransom
What else can some old varmint do
Who ain't too young or handsome?

Ain't never stole a heart before
I always been a loner
But, through your pomes, I wanted you
To be an organ donor!

So if ya want it back
A deal can be made.
What other body parts you got
That you would like to trade????  
Alle'cram
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18 posted 06-28-2000 12:42 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Hi Marge, This one just too cute!!  Made me grin from ear to ear. Stole your smile, give it back!!   Too cute! Ball's remark, hard one to follow, enjoyed his little ditty too.
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19 posted 06-28-2000 12:56 AM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

I think you're wonderful....*smitten grin*

Once again Marge...very nice...

I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan
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Think I will head off to bed for the evening with a smile on my face after reading a wonderful poem.
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This was truelly lively and funny,thanks for bringing me up!

:*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul
Marge Tindal
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22 posted 06-28-2000 07:40 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Denise~
Appreciate the reply.

SEA~
I'm delighted to tickle you !

Rex~
LOL !  Well, I remember your first post -
'Love Beyond Perception' -
it was a tear-jerker !
I like to see a little humor too -
but the best thing about Passion's is the
variety of emotions on display.
I just love it all !

Eloise~
Thank you, hon.  

Alle~
So glad to give you a smile.

Breathe~
I'm glad to see you and to share a grin.

Mike~
Thank you, my Kansas friend.

LittleCookie~
Welcome to Passion's.
Glad you enjoyed this.

Balladeer~
LOL !

For someone so handsome
I'd gladly pay the ransom
I'll make you a deal
that to you should appeal !

A winsome set of hips
or perhaps some luscious lips !
There's also a gorgeous set of gams
that carry around all that I am.

A variable shopping list of sorts
to greet your organ needs ..
but I just have to ask ya'
You aren't bartering for my
gluteus maximus ?  Are you ?

*Like I said ... we're nuts and
enjoying every minute of it !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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23 posted 06-28-2000 08:41 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

That sounds like quite a package
Of satisfying treats
And I could get some snackage
Mileage out of all those sweets!

You are the Publix of my dreams
Quite worthy of my ballad
But gluteus maximus? To me that seems
Like something on a salad!!


yep, certifiably insane for sure  
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OMG the poem is fantastic but the follow up is beyond words
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