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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
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australia

0 posted 2000-06-27 07:21 AM



The end of a day….
The end of an hour…

The end of a path
The end of a story

The beginning of a minute
The beginning of a second

The beginning of a heartbeat
The beginning of a breath

The beginning of a grand adventure

One must be mourned for the other to be rejoiced

Be it not for the end
There can not be the beginning

Pause for the end
Leap for beginning

Today I cry for the end
Tomorrow I sing for the beginning

Love is the Part which has no end nor beginning
I love today…I loved yesterday…I will  love tomorrow

You are my Today
You are my tomorrow

We are my everyday

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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
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1 posted 2000-06-27 11:18 AM


Hi eyesplus2,

This is perfect I love the completeness of it. Very well done thanks for sharing.

Cerenity

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-06-27 11:34 AM


"We are my everyday"

What a wonderful way to end such a beautiful sentiment. Much applause on this one.

LoveBug
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3 posted 2000-06-27 11:59 AM


"Be it not for the end
There can not be the beginning"

Beautiful and true words, my friend. Wonderful writing.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-06-27 12:41 PM


Nice work, very nice indeed!!!

regards, sudhir

Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne

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