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Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01
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0 posted 2000-06-26 02:22 AM


You shoved yourself inside of me
Forcing yourself all the way in
I tried to fight but you were too strong
The pain was unbearable - burning, ripping my skin
You pounded yourself into me
Slamming my body into the ground
I tried to fight you and I tried to scream
But all that came out was a small whimpering sound
You grunted and moaned as you took your pleasure from me
Tasting tears that stung as they fell down my cheeks
My body hurt all over from what you had done
I prayed that death would set me free
You pounded yourself harder into me
Slamming my broken body into the earth
Then inside of me you emptied your bitter seed
Nothing my life now was worth
With cold eyes you stared at me
As I pulled my torn pants back on and wiped away dirt and blood
You told me not to tell anyone
Inside my soul was dead.



[This message has been edited by Moonshine (edited 06-26-2000).]

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linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia
1 posted 2000-06-26 07:06 AM


omg this is a painful subject.  I cried dry tears reading it, and forgot to breathe, and sighed a huge sigh, many minutes after I finished reading it.
Linda M.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-06-26 07:32 AM


Very sad and very painful. Hugs my dear friend.

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"


Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01
Posts 265
Australia
3 posted 2000-06-26 10:36 PM


Thanx for your reply and comment Linda.

Thanx M, for being the sweet friend that you are.

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