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Only for You (written by request from aimster)
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Only for You (written by request from aimster) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Amy, How is this for a start to the story you now know? Only for You quietly resting in the secluded recesses of my soul are memories of you-of love when I could feel you without touching talk to you without speaking -a lifetime ago dreams and desires gently-yet slowly and painfully gathered into an isolated resting place a resting place from which you now ask of me to open into the long lost light of day from which I do only for you with outcome unknown conflict now sewn -only for you Mark B. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well i dont know what the "story" is... but i know the poem is beautiful its got a soft, mystical or cyptic quality about it... like a sweetly kept secret. very nice read...VERY like the way you express your emotions take care, jm baby dont you work so hard for this prize you've found, it will all be gone-when you turn around, cause nothing lasts forever anyway. Rick Roberts |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very Pretty......reminds me of the sentiment i felt when i penned a piece called "secret garden".. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
jm- as always you are to kind. Thank you for the time you spend laying your eyes to my words. I much appreciate it. prometheus- thank you and I would love to see your piece "secret garden" get posted as I am sure many here would. You pen nicely. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very well written indeed Mark. I guess we don't get to hear the "story"? Marina It is blessing to have wings for your words, and passion to flow from pen. Marina Crossley |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ this is wonderful, are you gonna tell the "story" ???  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Boy, you really know how to spark everyone's curiosity...I liked your poem. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
HMMMMMMM.....i think the question on evreyones mind is "What is the story?" well whatever the story is....it is a very nice and sweet poem...I liked it!!!  Julie :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
To Marina, SEA, Martie, and JulieAnn-- this is the second beginning of a life that I will gladly share once I am able to find the words. I promise to work on this diligently until the words hit. Thank you all for your responses and for the curiousity. I hope I don't let you down. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just a quick repost for a chance for Amy to read since she was the one this one came about even though she is not the topic in it she did have an inspiration in it. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is so beautiful...I'm so glad Amy requested this work from you...I can certainly see why~ when I could feel you without touching talk to you without speaking -a lifetime ago This stanza touched me heart and soul..thank you for sharing it and thank you Amy for requesting it~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
It hurt when i first read it...it hurts worse now that I know |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This just flowed so beautifully Mark! Much enjoyed this lovely verse! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I hope Amy is as pleased with this as I am... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am surprised at the response to this one and I thank you all very much for reading and replying. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Mark. . . Ok, now you've got us all wondering. . . keep it coming. . . we want to know. . . And I'm quite sure that Amy loves this!! ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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