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On the Spirit Cosmos
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On the Spirit Cosmos |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
On the Spirit Cosmos He speaks of what he sees and hears his universe defined by senses, constructing theories, deducing more he prates his views. Uncaring ears retreat to camouflaged defenses, where knowledge is the classic bore for feelings have usurped the throne of choice and smiling zen-like tones have filtered out the middle, left behind the highs and lows to stone its manic comprehension clones. Is man, Creation's best, bereft the means to apprehend what lies beyond the sense of sight and touch? Can he not know the spirit realm, a part of which he must comprise, as well as earth adored so much? Does he allow to overwhelm his contemplative spirit side, kaleidoscopic views of matter absorbing every hour awake? The seen and unseen must not collide, parallel sides of reality's platter were not designed for their own sake. [This message has been edited by H. Arlequin (edited 06-27-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
*applause* while your postings are infrequent compared to most others, the quality of your poetry more than makes up for the wait. Excellent poetry as always. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Excellent. Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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snow in summer Member
since 1999-08-28
Posts 67 |
Enjoyed a lot - especially the last three lines. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Bravo, HA!! Wonderfully written and expressed!  Denise |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
Hi Mike, Prometheus, s in s, and Denise, You are wonderfully encouraging and I sincerely appreciate it, the very best, HA |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You're welcome, HA! So glad to see you posting here again! Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey Goob... This is a good'n, as usual - Like snow, I enjoyed the final verses most..  |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
"....like honey to the taste..." are the words of Passion....and its moderators, to me...  )))smoooooooooooooooooches galore HA |
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