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kaile
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0 posted 2000-06-26 07:33 AM


Obsession with craft~
Hours spent perfecting art~
Yet content addict

© Copyright 2000 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
Dennis L. White
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1 posted 2000-06-26 09:33 AM


Kaile, Good one! mind if I try one?

Striving verbalist
Metrical copmosition
Again and again

P.S. I missed your 500th Post, Belated CONGRATULATIONS! I for one appreciate your thoughtful works you post here! Dennis :^)

kaile
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2 posted 2000-06-29 11:26 AM


Of course, i dont mind,dennis...in fact i am deeply honoured that you have tried a poetry senyru for me....thanx you lots

for u:

Ecstasy addict~
Suffers withdrawal symptoms~
When Writer's Block sets

Dennis L. White
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3 posted 2000-06-29 02:21 PM


Kaile,
  You've done it again, my friend, You just keep cranking them out! Amazing!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

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4 posted 2000-06-29 03:11 PM


Kaile,

educate me, please, what is the difference between Senyru and Haiku? I know the difference between Haiku and Tanka. Thanks!

And Yes, I like this piece!

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Jamie
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5 posted 2000-07-07 11:55 AM


Aren't these great!

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Mon Cherie
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6 posted 2001-12-05 05:56 PM


Ha! I bet you're talking about yourself!! You told me to be careful when I joined, coz you said the posts here are so wonderful they're addictive. Now I'm addicted too.   though I haven't quite find the time yet to perfect my craft.  

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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7 posted 2003-01-06 04:13 AM


yep!
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