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Open Poetry #8

My Crying Heart

RHONDA BROYLES
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since 2000-06-23

Posts 9

0 posted 2000-06-26 06:25 AM

Oh sweetheart, how I wish to hold you once more. Oh how I long to kiss your soft lips.Oh how I anticipate the arrival of your strong,muscular arms wrapped so tighty around me so tight you will you will never let go. I remember you used to whisper soft,sweet nothings in my ear taking back in time where words spoken like that would have become unkown. Back in time where it was fate that could have brought these two souls together. Oh how my heart wimpers from the sound of your distant voice calling in the wind. My tears fall like a wind blown petal of a rose falling to the ground like when my heart crumbled when you left me. I still smell the scent of your cologne flowing in the breeze. Your voice still lingers though you have gone. Why did you have to leave me sweetheart? My heart cries out to you please come back.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2000-06-27 01:28 AM

Rhonda,
I can feel the longing in this one. . . just excellent!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

2 posted 2000-06-27 01:33 AM

The pain lessens, but the ache will not be forgotten,,,the emotion speaks

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2000-06-27 01:51 AM

This makes me want to reach out and give you a reassuring hug. Touches deep within. Hope the pain goes away soon.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

4 posted 2000-06-27 02:03 AM

~my heart whimpers from the sound of his voice~ this verse is quite heartfelt as the entire poem echoed deep emotions.

Coco

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2000-06-27 06:35 AM

Rhonda~
This has such longing and heartache in it...a heart crying out for sure.
This was a great read
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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