»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #8
»
Stardust Fun
| Open Poetry #8 |
|
Stardust Fun |
|
|
Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Stardust Fun One time I would’nt mind Looking over some vast plain That intersects the skies And keeps the ground at bay. It would flow like blood Making everything live free, True to itself, it’s nature All things being equal. I would feel the pulse Of the stars and their antiquated Messages that hold some far out Distant meaning that has lost it’s way. To be sure, I would touch The nearest tree and wonder how old, And ask if it understood me Before realizing it was not listening. So I would sit under it’s canopy Using it for shade and shelter, Hoping not to get struck by Some idiotic sense of rightiousness. And there, in the planes of existance, There beyound my grasp, Would be the field of stars Laughing and playing as one. Holding onto their secrets, Like I hold onto my soul, Complete with memories of old and Sun’s, And their Stardust fun. |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey this was fantastic, the imagery was wonderful and I enjoyed the read greatly  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MichaelG~ Welcome to Passion's. Enjoyed your entrance. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Welcome!! And what an entrance! Wow! Beautiful poem, I love it. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
||
|
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Welcome to passions...I haven't been ehre long myself but I hope you throughly enjoy this site as much as me....great poem.....You have my vote!!!  Julie :) |
||
|
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Michael~ oh this was wonderful! loved the visual imagery in this piece! you got my vote as well. take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
