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douglasbailey
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 27
Palmerston North, New Zealand

0 posted 2000-06-26 04:14 AM


I’m tryin’ ta write a poem
But I can not get it flowin’
The thoughts are in my head
But I can not get them said

Thinkin’ bout my baby
Is making me all hazy
And I wish this stupid rhyming would stop
Before my head goes…






RAAAAAAA!
Douglas

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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
1 posted 2000-06-27 08:37 AM


Hi Douglasbailey,

Well not a bad start, maybe you could write about how your head go's !!!!!!!!

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
2 posted 2000-06-27 08:56 AM


Well, now I know the beginning.. let us know how your head comes out?

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



douglasbailey
Junior Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 27
Palmerston North, New Zealand
3 posted 2000-06-29 02:43 AM


Before my head goes pop!

(The poem I was trying to write eventually turned into a letter.)



RAAAAAAA!
Douglas

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