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Open Poetry #8

crying in the dark

Dragon's Soul
Junior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 25

0 posted 2000-06-26 03:11 AM

She Screams out loud
but doesn't make a sound
She fights for her life
but the demons drag her down

darkness fills her soul
fire burns her brain
the pills that should help her
soon become her escape

she falls to the floor
never to awake
her kids come to mind
but it's better for them this way

you must understand
she never wanted to die
she just wanted the pain to go away

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

1 posted 2000-06-26 03:19 AM

Dragon, such powerful expression here

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 06-26-2000).]

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-06-27 08:33 AM

Hi Dragon's Soul,

Very good perception here of one in pain, profound, enjoyed the read,

Cerenity

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

3 posted 2000-06-27 08:51 AM

A modern day tragedy.
Very nice

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Jan
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 114

4 posted 2000-06-27 09:11 AM

Very intense, and very well written

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