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Disolving Into The Core.......
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Disolving Into The Core....... |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
of her garden she wilts, Her once vibrant light shines no more, The sweet colours of her petals bleed slowly from her, The last shimmer of life dully ebbs to the cold floor, And with wounds left unhealed by the breadth of endless time, Her frail, broken body finally crumbles beneath her, Falling rapidly through the abyss of slow beating pain, To the rotting undergrowth where strong roots of hope once were, And like a loving mother calling her sweet child to come home, The dank, wet earth wraps itself around her dying soul, She takes comfort in the cold and dark of nothingness, Where nothing and noone exist anymore. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW, another GREAT one!  fantastic J! nice to read your poetry again Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx M for your lovely reply and comment - I am glad that you enjoy reading my poetry! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A wonderfully deep poem...thanks for sharing Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for reading Tracie! Glad you enjoyed it - thanx for your lovely reply. |
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