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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Open your door Would you take a chance on me I can't predict on what will be I'm sure your heart's been broken before All you have to do is open your door If I tell you we will last Then lies become the start of our past We'd run in meadows naked and free Running from promises not meant to be I'd like to say we could try And start our love like eagles fly Soar in the heavens landing in our nest Each flap of our wings is love at it's best Each day make love, the next we may cry But we will never know unless we try So I'm asking you to open your door My heart too has been broken before |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh Insect,...how very soft and sweet. I love it....love seeing this little side of you. hehe. Thank you for all the replies...  ...to my stuff. Please go back and check the rest of the Reflection in the Oven Door one. Ok,...back to this awesome poem. It's seems so from the heart and gentle. It's true though,...even if your heart's been broken,...you'll never know if you can feel it (love) again if you don't open those darn doors. Love this pal. hehe. *Peace.[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~bumpsorryhadtohehe*peace~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
So I'm asking you to open your door My heart too has been broken before ... nice lines from you insect in an emotionally charged work... muchly enjoyed... regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Oh insect, this is just so beautiful. How I wish that when chances like that are taken It would never end But sometimes when a heart's been broken It takes time to mend My heart has been broken recently And I'm sure your hearts been broken too And I truly hope that with your poem She takes a chance on you Like I said, this was so beautiful it actually brought tears to my eyes because I myself took a chance like that but in my case it didn't last. I hope so much that she takes a chance on you and turns out to be everything you hope. Good-luck  kat |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very beautiful poem of longing and hope very sweet and sincere poem take care, jm |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
SpitFire…OH! SpitFire is that you? Really glad to see you? A few days ago I saw a falling star and it was nice. But I got a really strange feeling about it. Then I never thought much about it. The next day my friend Jay who I know didn't seem like the same person but everything about him was the same. So I never thought much about it. I don't know why I told you that but I feel as if I'm being watched. Anyway thank you so much for your reply! SpitFire…Listen you… I don't know who you really are?? I was just talking to SpitFire so who are you?? The SpitFire I know never carries through with her sentences and she always writes *peace with a capital P …???…SO WHO ARE Yo…. oh no!! Invasion of the Body Snatchers!!!…RUN!!! Sudhir Iyer…I'm not opening the door unless you can prove your Sudhir.. Iyer..Do you have any large pods with you?..No! Alright then thanks for the great response friend! kat… kat is this really you! LOL You are so beautiful! You are so beautiful! Did I say that twice well I meant it. Here's my shoulder and here's my hand and here's a hug! Ok here's another hug! My door is open you better come in it's cold out there? ______________________ More Kittens Mamma licks them clean But where has she been Feeding by day Watching them play Prowling by night But not for a fight Cat calls she sends WOW! Five more kittens Furry and adorable Free and affordable Yes I gave one to you But I think you deserve two ________________________ May I cry with you kat?  Janet Marie…Thank you, you are very sweet too 2x2 |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Oh insect, you're too much.lol.. Yes you may cry with me if you like but to tell you the truth if you really don't need to cry, don't. By the way how many kittens will your cat keep on producing and how many times also?..lol. Thanks for the second kitten you're very sweet but be careful because the mom of those kittens may just start getting a little mean with you if you keep giving me her kittens. Don't want you getting hurt now. Thanks for your shoulder and hugs. kat |
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