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Never and a Promise
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Never and a Promise |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Never whisper I love you's If you really don't care Never speak to me of feelings If they really aren't there Never touch my heart If your's will part Never hold my hand If you're not beside me to stand Never look into my eyes If all you'll do is lie Never say to me hello If it means a soon goodbye Never say forever Because forever will make me cry And if you really mean forever Promise my heart that you'll try. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
And if you really mean forever Promise my heart that you'll try. I hope that he will answer "yes" truthfully, and make that promise, because that promise of love is the lest he should give you. well take care, wish you luck and hope that he treats your heart well. really enjoyed the poem. "An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots" joy division |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Coco, Great writing!! I hope that you hear the words you long to hear from him and hope he realizes what a special person he is getting if he chooses to try. It is all any of us can ask for. Nice poem.  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Another one of your poems beautifully written, Coco!!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"But never is a promise and you can't afford to lie. . ." -----Fiona Apple Sorry, reminded me of that song Coco. . . excellent poem. . . "never say never", unless. . . Superb my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Coco~ beautiful! i hope you hear the answers you want...or at least that they are honest with you. Take care! Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I love this one..it really speaks to me at this time in my life.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CocoBaci~ I love what you had to say and the presentation was outstanding. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
My regards to all of you Passion Friends who read my verses and take time to generously comment. It's a struggle these days some good some okay, but isn't life that way sometimes. I do know that love from the depths of a heart is the purest of all and the moments shared as few as they are with him make me believe that I'll have true love just maybe it's not meant to be with him. Thank you all Coco |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Coco this was excellent, a most beautiful read with many an emotion showing. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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