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When You Walk My Way

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Marge Tindal
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When You Walk My Way
~*Marge Tindal*~

When you walk my way
I watch your green eyes
Reliving the moment
Caught up in our sighs

With easy-remembering
a smile plays on my lips
The haunting memory
of your fingertips

Tracing the words
whispering my name
Never before
Never again

When you walk my way
my heart catches you
Forever here
Forever new





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 06-25-2000 02:20 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

Oh Marge, Wow - You just never cease to amaze me, this is so perfectly beautiful.  Bonnie
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~Marge~

Girl, you've done it again, an excellent poem as always.  To me, it's different than your usual poems, in a sense that there is a sadness, but a great hope at the end.  Actually, right now this is how I feel - this week has been devastating, so thank you for writing this well expressed poem.  Your talent amazes me.  Shakespeare's got nothin' on you  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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3 posted 06-25-2000 02:42 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Marge, this is sweet
.. never before never again
.. forever here forever new
I adore this verse
Coco  
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4 posted 06-25-2000 03:13 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Sweet, sad, romantic...and a lovely verse!
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5 posted 06-25-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Marge, I have run out of words to describe how beautiful your poetry is!!
Every poem of yours has its own special magic and this one is no exception.
Wonderful!!!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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6 posted 06-25-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Marge~

Sigh . . .

When you write these words
You make my heart smile
Most beautiful I've heard
In a long long while

You always seems to say
What is on my mind
Each and every day
I seek and then I find

Your poetry amazes me
Always seems to flow
I hope you too can see
The seeds you have sewn

This is lovely my friend.  Really beautiful words.  Still see that hope...  

Lone Wolf


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7 posted 06-25-2000 03:41 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Marge, this is so beautiful.  

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!


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BSC~
Bonnie, thank you, hon for your nice replies.

Melissa~
Sorry you found it sad ... perhaps what you are going through made it appear so.

Now don't be going and swelling my head with that 'Willie' stuff ! LOL !

CocoBaci~
Thank you for the adoration.
The phrases you chose are also important to me.

Martie~
Thank you, my friend.
Not meant to be 'sad' ... just romantic.

Lil' Lizzie~
Well now - for a gal 'out of words' you sure did a bang-up job of letting me know you like it !
Have I told you today that I love ya' ?
Well - I DO !

LoneWolf~
Your poetic response touched me deeply.
I always think that someone's heart sends me the thoughts that I write - nice to know you find them to your liking.  
Sowing seeds for you is A-Okay with me !  

Elizabeth~
I'm pleased that you find it beautiful.
I love to think in shades of 'beauty'.
~*Marge*~


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WOW!!  How wonderfully romantic!!  
(Added to my, love this one, Marge!
list)

~Lorraine




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Marge, this is so beautiful, and yet so sad. I can relate to it very well. I hope you have better luck in the future!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea
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Beautiful poem!!!!!!
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Lorraine~
Thank you for seing the sheer 'romance' in this piece.  

LoveBug~
Honey, it isn't sad at all - I promise.
It is meant to reflect the joy of seeing someone you love come toward you and losing yourself in the wonder of -

'When you walk my way
my heart catches you
Forever here
Forever new'

*HUGS* to you.

VanDana~
I love knowing that you're here, doll !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge,

lovely poem as always!!

funny how the others find this sad but i have read this as a person who is reliving the moment and the sheer magic when he first met his love....a fascinating Love at First Sight moment that is most beautiful and is in a class of its own--unmatched by others

interesting to see how this poem means differently to different people
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Gee, Marge, when I walk your way those high heels really hurt, the pantyhose pulls at the hairs on my legs and my hips hurt from swaying back and forth.....but I sure do get a lot of whistles!

In order to keep a true perspective of one's importance, everyone should have a dog that will worship him and a cat that will ignore him.
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Kaile~
Thank you for your insight, my friend.
Interpretation is a neat thing, is it not?
Guess that's why we write.
Love the different views -
and speaking of DIFFERENT VIEWS ! !
See Balladeer !

Balladeer~

Only you
would think to say
that you walk
in such a way

Silly fellow
now you behave
The hairy legs
you should SHAVE !

Can't do much
about the hips
But, boy I'd whistle
for those lips !

Love you, bad boy ! ! !  
~*Marge*~


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Wonderful, Marge! This just about sums up love!  

Denise
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Denise~
Thank you, hon.
It just about sums it up to me too !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge, I have run out of words to describe your poetry.  All I know is I look forward to always seeing the name Marge Tindal attached and I know if will be a beauty, such as this.  
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Eloise~
I thank you from the bottom of my poetic heart.
A poet couldn't ask for sweeter praise than what you have given me.
I love what I do and I'm glad it shows.
Bless you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Very beautiful poem!!!  I loved it. I can't wait to read more of your poems.  

[This message has been edited by star216 (edited 06-26-2000).]
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Marge such sweet words of harmony you have written here.
To walk your way would be a pleasure I bet  
luv ya Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


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As lovely as lovely can get...

Marge, this is another beautiful poem from you...sometimes I feel I should give up writing...

regards, sudhir.

Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne
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Star~
Thank you, hon.
I hope you enjoy them all.

Tracie~
Awwwwwwwwwwww !  How sweet of you.  

Sudhir~
Merci, my friend.
Never, ever give up writing.
I appreciate your words of praise ....
let inspiration from others fill your heart with words of splendor.

~*Marge*~


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{~,^}, HUGS, my green eyed friend...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

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