Girl, you've done it again, an excellent poem as always. To me, it's different than your usual poems, in a sense that there is a sadness, but a great hope at the end. Actually, right now this is how I feel - this week has been devastating, so thank you for writing this well expressed poem. Your talent amazes me. Shakespeare's got nothin' on you
BSC~ Bonnie, thank you, hon for your nice replies.
Melissa~ Sorry you found it sad ... perhaps what you are going through made it appear so.
Now don't be going and swelling my head with that 'Willie' stuff ! LOL !
CocoBaci~ Thank you for the adoration. The phrases you chose are also important to me.
Martie~ Thank you, my friend. Not meant to be 'sad' ... just romantic.
Lil' Lizzie~ Well now - for a gal 'out of words' you sure did a bang-up job of letting me know you like it ! Have I told you today that I love ya' ? Well - I DO !
LoneWolf~ Your poetic response touched me deeply. I always think that someone's heart sends me the thoughts that I write - nice to know you find them to your liking. Sowing seeds for you is A-Okay with me !
Elizabeth~ I'm pleased that you find it beautiful. I love to think in shades of 'beauty'. ~*Marge*~
~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ firstname.lastname@example.org
Jersey City, NJ USA
funny how the others find this sad but i have read this as a person who is reliving the moment and the sheer magic when he first met his love....a fascinating Love at First Sight moment that is most beautiful and is in a class of its own--unmatched by others
interesting to see how this poem means differently to different people
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA