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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-06-25 02:08 PM




When You Walk My Way
~*Marge Tindal*~

When you walk my way
I watch your green eyes
Reliving the moment
Caught up in our sighs

With easy-remembering
a smile plays on my lips
The haunting memory
of your fingertips

Tracing the words
whispering my name
Never before
Never again

When you walk my way
my heart catches you
Forever here
Forever new





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2000-06-25 02:20 PM


Oh Marge, Wow - You just never cease to amaze me, this is so perfectly beautiful.  Bonnie
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2 posted 2000-06-25 02:29 PM



~Marge~

Girl, you've done it again, an excellent poem as always.  To me, it's different than your usual poems, in a sense that there is a sadness, but a great hope at the end.  Actually, right now this is how I feel - this week has been devastating, so thank you for writing this well expressed poem.  Your talent amazes me.  Shakespeare's got nothin' on you  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

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3 posted 2000-06-25 02:42 PM


Marge, this is sweet
.. never before never again
.. forever here forever new
I adore this verse
Coco  

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4 posted 2000-06-25 03:13 PM


Sweet, sad, romantic...and a lovely verse!
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5 posted 2000-06-25 03:18 PM


Marge, I have run out of words to describe how beautiful your poetry is!!
Every poem of yours has its own special magic and this one is no exception.
Wonderful!!!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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6 posted 2000-06-25 03:27 PM


Marge~

Sigh . . .

When you write these words
You make my heart smile
Most beautiful I've heard
In a long long while

You always seems to say
What is on my mind
Each and every day
I seek and then I find

Your poetry amazes me
Always seems to flow
I hope you too can see
The seeds you have sewn

This is lovely my friend.  Really beautiful words.  Still see that hope...  

Lone Wolf


Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith


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7 posted 2000-06-25 03:41 PM


Marge, this is so beautiful.  

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



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8 posted 2000-06-25 04:54 PM


BSC~
Bonnie, thank you, hon for your nice replies.

Melissa~
Sorry you found it sad ... perhaps what you are going through made it appear so.

Now don't be going and swelling my head with that 'Willie' stuff ! LOL !

CocoBaci~
Thank you for the adoration.
The phrases you chose are also important to me.

Martie~
Thank you, my friend.
Not meant to be 'sad' ... just romantic.

Lil' Lizzie~
Well now - for a gal 'out of words' you sure did a bang-up job of letting me know you like it !
Have I told you today that I love ya' ?
Well - I DO !

LoneWolf~
Your poetic response touched me deeply.
I always think that someone's heart sends me the thoughts that I write - nice to know you find them to your liking.  
Sowing seeds for you is A-Okay with me !  

Elizabeth~
I'm pleased that you find it beautiful.
I love to think in shades of 'beauty'.
~*Marge*~


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9 posted 2000-06-25 06:02 PM



WOW!!  How wonderfully romantic!!  
(Added to my, love this one, Marge!
list)

~Lorraine




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10 posted 2000-06-25 06:08 PM


Marge, this is so beautiful, and yet so sad. I can relate to it very well. I hope you have better luck in the future!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

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11 posted 2000-06-25 06:18 PM


Beautiful poem!!!!!!
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12 posted 2000-06-25 06:35 PM


Lorraine~
Thank you for seing the sheer 'romance' in this piece.  

LoveBug~
Honey, it isn't sad at all - I promise.
It is meant to reflect the joy of seeing someone you love come toward you and losing yourself in the wonder of -

'When you walk my way
my heart catches you
Forever here
Forever new'

*HUGS* to you.

VanDana~
I love knowing that you're here, doll !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2000-06-25 07:08 PM


Marge,

lovely poem as always!!

funny how the others find this sad but i have read this as a person who is reliving the moment and the sheer magic when he first met his love....a fascinating Love at First Sight moment that is most beautiful and is in a class of its own--unmatched by others

interesting to see how this poem means differently to different people

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14 posted 2000-06-25 08:39 PM


Gee, Marge, when I walk your way those high heels really hurt, the pantyhose pulls at the hairs on my legs and my hips hurt from swaying back and forth.....but I sure do get a lot of whistles!

In order to keep a true perspective of one's importance, everyone should have a dog that will worship him and a cat that will ignore him.

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15 posted 2000-06-25 09:03 PM


Kaile~
Thank you for your insight, my friend.
Interpretation is a neat thing, is it not?
Guess that's why we write.
Love the different views -
and speaking of DIFFERENT VIEWS ! !
See Balladeer !

Balladeer~

Only you
would think to say
that you walk
in such a way

Silly fellow
now you behave
The hairy legs
you should SHAVE !

Can't do much
about the hips
But, boy I'd whistle
for those lips !

Love you, bad boy ! ! !  
~*Marge*~


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16 posted 2000-06-25 10:02 PM


Wonderful, Marge! This just about sums up love!  

Denise

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Denise~
Thank you, hon.
It just about sums it up to me too !
~*Marge*~


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18 posted 2000-06-26 02:18 AM


Marge, I have run out of words to describe your poetry.  All I know is I look forward to always seeing the name Marge Tindal attached and I know if will be a beauty, such as this.  
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19 posted 2000-06-26 02:35 AM


Eloise~
I thank you from the bottom of my poetic heart.
A poet couldn't ask for sweeter praise than what you have given me.
I love what I do and I'm glad it shows.
Bless you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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20 posted 2000-06-26 02:46 AM


Very beautiful poem!!!  I loved it. I can't wait to read more of your poems.  

[This message has been edited by star216 (edited 06-26-2000).]

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21 posted 2000-06-26 03:48 AM


Marge such sweet words of harmony you have written here.
To walk your way would be a pleasure I bet  
luv ya Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



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22 posted 2000-06-26 11:18 AM


As lovely as lovely can get...

Marge, this is another beautiful poem from you...sometimes I feel I should give up writing...

regards, sudhir.

Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne

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23 posted 2000-06-26 02:21 PM


Star~
Thank you, hon.
I hope you enjoy them all.

Tracie~
Awwwwwwwwwwww !  How sweet of you.  

Sudhir~
Merci, my friend.
Never, ever give up writing.
I appreciate your words of praise ....
let inspiration from others fill your heart with words of splendor.

~*Marge*~


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{~,^}, HUGS, my green eyed friend...

Sunny

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Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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25 posted 2000-06-26 04:17 PM


I love the little sweet picture this created!!  I need to just face the fact I'm in love with love!!  Loved this piece, Marge!!  You write lovely poetry!!
Bridgette  


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26 posted 2000-06-26 04:28 PM


Just beautiful and a little sad....nice work  

Julie :)



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27 posted 2000-06-26 07:44 PM


Karilea~
*Hugs* back at you, gal !

JustBleu~
Thanks, hon.
'In love with love' ?  ME TOO !

JulieAnn~
Glad you enjoyed.
~*Marge*~


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28 posted 2000-06-26 10:04 PM


Marge~

That I find your thoughts to my liking is an understatement!!!  They are wonderful!!  Perhaps some of them come from my heart?  Keep up the grat work.  Glad to see you do not mind sewing the seeds!!  

LW



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--Michael W. Smith


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29 posted 2000-06-27 07:45 AM


LoneWolf~
It is such a pleasure to know that what I write finds it's way to your heart.
Sharing thoughts is what it's all about, isn't it ?
Thank you, my friend for enjoying what gives me such pleasure to do.
~*Marge*~


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30 posted 2000-06-27 08:46 AM


Marge:  This was so beautiful!  You really touched my heart with this one. I love your work.  

kat

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Kat~
Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment.  I appreciate you letting me know.
~*Marge*~



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Marge~ I think everything you write is fantastic! This is soooooo goooood!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



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33 posted 2000-06-27 10:42 PM


Lovey one Marge! sweet too.
I enjoyed this!  

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SEA~
I like your smile, my friend.  

WhiteDove~
Appreciate you - I do !
~*Marge*~


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35 posted 2000-06-28 03:27 PM


Marge~
    You have taken my breath away again!  You WILL NEVER CEASE to amaze me, dear!

I only wish that I had half of your talent!



Love Ya, Dearie~~~


~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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36 posted 2000-06-28 11:32 PM


TerryW~
Oh, love ... you just made my night !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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