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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-06-25 02:07 PM


I posted my first 'soulmate' poem entitled "Soulmate Of My Heart" and this is the sequel to it.  My friend Sheri is getting married and I will give this to her in the wedding card.  Is it good enough?


*For Sheri-Lyn and Cedric on their wedding day*
~August 5, 2000~


~SOULMATE~


God created you
out of the depths of my soul,
out of the desires of my heart,
and out of the purity of my tears,
for, even before I breathed
my first breath of life,
you were meant to be mine,
and, I, yours
forevermore,
two bodies of angels,
sharing one soul,
a match made in heaven


*By Melissa Honeybee*


© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
1 posted 2000-06-25 02:44 PM


beautiful Melissa, can you write anything wrong? I think not, a touching tribute,
truely beautiful.

"An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools
Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots"
joy division

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2000-06-25 03:43 PM


Melissa,

I think it is perfect!!!  Wonderful!!  

LW


Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith


Sven
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3 posted 2000-06-25 05:23 PM


Melissa,
        it's perfect, just like the poet who created it. . .

Wonderful. . .

-----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-06-25 05:45 PM


Melissa,

Oh hon this is PERFECT!! Absolutely
beautiful and creative just like the
poet who wrote it! Take care sweets.
Amy   < !signature-->

"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."





[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-25-2000).]

redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
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honolulu, hawaii
5 posted 2000-06-25 05:47 PM


totally pretty, it reminds me of giving birth also.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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Ontario, CANADA
6 posted 2000-06-25 09:45 PM



I guess I must not be used to compliments, I am floored by all your replies, THANK YOU SO MUCH!

And, Redheart Angrybraids, I like your standpoint of how my poem could also be about the bond between mother and child as kindred spirits, thanks for the reply

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