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just a little quickie for PoetdeVine'sFreedomChallenge
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just a little quickie for PoetdeVine'sFreedomChallenge |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
~Freedom Is….~ I lock the front door From the outside... Walk down the steps And enter my pride.  She will go 150 MPH If I let her have her head... But if I did that, oh my I would surely wind up dead. She is my freedom To go ANYWHERE... To see ANYTHING... She is my freedom. Traveling to the airport My love is coming in... Picking up the luggage We go for a spin. Walk up the steps to my place We lock the door from inside... Happy about my freedom Provided by my ride. ©6-24-00~CJB~ In case someone isn’t familiar with the expression… my ‘ride’ refers to my car(vehicle,wheels,etc.)  Caribbean Island Property(PARADISE) FOR SALE.Investors wanted to start World Class Resort and Marina.No Risk or Blue Sky. joonz@mindspring.com |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Nice poem, Magnolia!Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cute poem!! What kind of car do you have?  |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
liked your ditty, love your name, good choice. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a short and sweet ditty the car fanatics among us can well relate to...like your PRIDE here |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Thank you for the responses. I appreciate them! It was just a quick blurb off the top of my head... as my muse is DEAD!! Not kidding!!My personal quote is : "Feast or famine and I am starving to write". MagnoliaBlue Caribbean Island Property(PARADISE) FOR SALE.Investors wanted to start World Class Resort and Marina.No Risk or Blue Sky. joonz@mindspring.com |
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