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Don't Go Away,My Love
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Don't Go Away,My Love |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
You and I are here, You gave your heart to me, I gave my heart to you, So,My love, Please don't go away, Tomorrow is a long time, So,stay in my arms, I'll keep you warm, You looked into my eyes, When I say I love you, So don't go away, I'm alone And I know You're only one Who can make me happy, So I offer this open arms to you, Take my hand, Come to me, You know, The stars above are so bright, Let me hold you tight, So don't away, my love, I love you with my all heart, So , Please don't go away, my love, I need someone like you to love me, So Iam telling you Don't go away, I need you to stay with me, I need someone like you To love me, So,please don't go away, [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Lovely, lovely thoughts. Thanks to you for scouring the archives also. I've read your lovely comments and I thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I loved every word, Vandana. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Another nice poem Vandana. Very well written. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Vandana, Touching and heartfelt words here. Very nice writing.  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
vandana. . . This is just wonderful. . . a beautiful song to the one that you love. . . *sigh*. . . it's funny how there's only one that will make our lives complete, isn't it?? We tell them over and over, just so they don't forget. . .becuase without them. . . Superb my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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