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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Perhaps you could have loved me more Perhaps you and I just didn't know Just seems the heartache continues to grow Although you stay my heart aches from being alone Perhaps I gave you my love too easily Perhaps our heart connection was not meant to be Sitting here alone at night I shed many tears and quiver in sighs I gave you the best to make you and I happy But it just wasn't enough to keep you beside me I have no choice but to let you and I go My heart is now begging me to part from your's Somehow I will learn to live my life without you Perhaps we didn't have the same heart connection.  Coco |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful heart rendering expressions CoCo you already know i relate... sometimes we find ourselves in the letting go take care, jm |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Coco, your emotions are so well expressed. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Sad...and beautifully written, Coco!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CocoBaci~ Holding on to letting go can be so painful. Enjoyed the tender render. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Coco~ this was beautiful! exquisitely written from the heart! i've always believed sometimes by letting go we are able to still hold on. i know that sounds strange...but by letting go of the hurt and pain, we are in the end sometimes able to hold onto the good and the love. take care! Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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