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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Dark eyes touching me Dark eyes holding me Dark eyes searching my heart Dark eyes haunting me Dark eyes wanting me Dark eyes stealing my soul Burning in their heat Consumed by their desire Dark eyes leading me on You're my dark eyed lover Nothing I can do Because body and soul I belong to you Dark eyes filling my dreams Dark eyes making me scream Dark eyes taking me home |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
wowza! this was powerfully intense. liked much, i did! captivating words you've penned here! take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
The eyes can be even more powerful than any other part of the body. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
INTENSE INDEED love this ones slow burn very nice, very jm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I cant believe i never replied to this... Aimster...thanks and i appreciate you reading my stuff Elizabeth...they are the first thing i look at sometimes the only thing that matters JM...thanks... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula....... Wonderful read, and it brings to mind that old saying: " the eyes are the window to the soul" Hold life with an open hand....leaving it room to grow.... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Those eyes.....windows to the soul and a reflection of our own at times, beautifully done~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOOPS lost again... Sunny1...I love to look into someones eyes...to see to know. Butterflies...thanks |
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