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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-06-24 03:25 PM



the river of emotion carrying me downstream
holding me fast, lungs fill with water
unable to breathe......
over the waterfall of dreams....
they pass me by unnoticed it seems
down the river bed of laughter
remembering fairytales happy ever after
sunshine beams engulfing me
soak me into the roaring sea
carried farther into the bliss
of life unordinary
will it be me that you miss?
oh heavenly father grant me one wish
let me find happiness overflowing my dish
i need what i can't have
what i'll never find
tell me where to find happiness sublime...

Julie :)



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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
1 posted 2000-06-24 03:35 PM


oh heavenly father grant me one wish
let me find happiness overflowing my dish
i need what i can't have
what i'll never find
tell me where to find happiness sublime...

a beautiful poem, I hope you find happiness sublime and if you some to spare you can sent it to me.  

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral.
Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-06-24 04:05 PM


Wow!!! Sublime happiness is a wonderful thought   Actually, I think the closest I come is when I am here reading all of this wonderful poetry. Thanks for sharing this poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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