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Dreaming of Reality [circa 1968]
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Dreaming of Reality [circa 1968] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Dreaming of Reality O feel the sun so bright all around I hear the flowers bloom though in reality it is still night I sleep alone in my room in my bed, all curled up dreaming of a special land, full of splendor and love, crystalline majestic, ballroom grand see me here, so serene and free, everyone wears a smile so wide, but most of the time, it's a lovers world and a man walks by my side. Grasses and flowers then fade away to a beach with miles of sand my love and I decide to stay and we walk closer, hand in hand the surf is in the distance O hear the sound of its roar I stand closer, so does he waves lap upon the shore soon my dream begins to fade, gone is the wind, the sea, the sand gone is the night, and day gone are the lovers hand in hand circa 1968 ©KRJ 24 June 2000 |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautifully written dream. Don't you hate to wake up sometimes. Liz |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes, only sometimes, Elizabeth. Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Dreams can be so wonderful! Just like this poem  But I have to say, when it's a nightmare waking up is just fine by me!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a beautiful poem, wonderful. my bed, all curled up dreaming of a special land, full of splendor and love, crystalline majestic, ballroom grand "I see myself as an intelligent, sensitive human, with the soul of a clown which forces me to blow it at the most important moments". Jim Morrison |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ESP, so true!, thanks... Brian, thank you!... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
soon my dream begins to fade, gone is the wind, the sea, the sand gone is the night, and day gone are the lovers hand in hand... .... how often does one wish that a beautiful dream such as this lasts forever...in reality... nice poem Karilea...enjoyable as ever... regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Sudhir...so glad you read and liked... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You've made this desert dweller long for the sea! Lovely poem.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine Gal~ Lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
PdV...nice place to live, but be happy where you are...I'm in the middle of the USA, and couldn't be happier... Marge, thanks! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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