photo denial(just a lame little ditty of frustration

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Open Poetry #8

photo denial(just a lame little ditty of frustration

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

0 posted 2000-06-24 01:28 AM

I have been
adding and subtracting
my image for hours.
Fitting it to format,
for eyes to then tower,
but no release.
No visual relation
has excepted its
brown and white page,
for desecration.

Hello photo,
can you see me?
Have you been lost
in the screening?

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-06-24 04:08 AM

rh---again, I really like this thoughtful look at self---You are like a Rorschach Test of imagery---don't stop, me friend.... I like thinking...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2000-06-24 05:35 AM

Maybe you should'nt be the one doing the screening. I can see the title relationship here.
By the way, I love that name -redheart angrybraids - a very noble moving sound to it.
Great poem from the other side of why!

Alexander Duke
Junior Member

since 2000-06-16

Posts 12

3 posted 2000-06-24 07:06 AM

I read this and laughed because I identify with it. Nice poem

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2000-06-24 09:02 AM

Send me your photo and I'll see what I can do! (If you're talking about the photo you uploaded to the site, it didn't take..there isn't one there).

redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

5 posted 2000-06-24 07:59 PM

-thank you serenity, i always love reading your notes, as well as your poetry.

-thank you ethrome, maybe your right, i'm not much of a screener.

-thank you duke, i'm a nut ya know.

-poet deVine, I have sent my photo to Ron's mail box, however if there is no result, i will forward my photo to your mail box, thank you kindly.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2000-06-24 08:52 PM

this is so short and intense!liked it muchly

lol at the word "desecration"--just what evil deeds are you up to--perhaps thats the reason why your photo has been denied!

redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

7 posted 2000-06-24 10:46 PM

i'm just being purely over dramatic, about how we judge poeple on appearance, though i do like your joke, made me chuckle. thank you for your reply.
just a dork,
redheart angrybraids

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

jennie may*
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 122

8 posted 2000-06-24 11:25 PM

cute.

I like the owl, too.

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

9 posted 2000-06-25 01:38 PM

Ah, isn't technology wonderful?

Elizabeth

I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!

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