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Open Poetry #8
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sleepless
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since 2000-06-20
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0 posted 2000-06-24 01:13 AM


I'm really falling for you,

under raindrops of love.

From the skies overhead,

I watch you beautifully run.

From the white of the light,

to the darkness of doom.

Here I come to rescue,

My great one.
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1 posted 2000-06-24 04:35 PM

Are you 'sleepless' cause you're writing these great poems? I liked the line about falling under raindrops of love.

I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!
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