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Open Poetry #8
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redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
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0 posted 2000-06-24 12:14 PM

Shaved
from sands
dusted,
unknown
arrival. I quivered
at the starkness
of you bare
faced,
and staring.
Unglowing
the glow
of wide eyed
and nimble toed.
Unpixeled to your
stem, heavy and wet,
you stare,
brown petaled,
and heavy headed.
Cradled
in the dusty remains
of sanded mess.
© Copyright 2000 Amelia A. Ensign - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-06-24 12:52 PM

Very good..great use of your words in this one.  
redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii
2 posted 2000-06-24 01:00 AM

thanz poet de vine,
i really appriciate the comment coming from you.


Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids
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