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Dreams Of Tomorrow |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I lie here looking at the ceiling < !signature-->Trying to understand how I'm feeling My mind is filled with many thoughts Happiness is what I had sought Once I held it in my hand But it slipped through like a grain of sand Now I try to pierce the dark With just one solitary spark Hoping against hope to light a fire No longer destined to walk the wire I close me eyes then I can see A glimpse of what tomorrow can be The future is full of promise and hope Just have to climb up the slope There warm sunshine will abound Perhaps happiness will again be found Somewhere on the other side of sorrow My thoughts are filled with dreams of tomorrow  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 06-23-2000).] |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it alot  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LW~ excellent! I am delighted to read this from you. You made me smile. Thank you! Beautiful poem. Take care. Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LW~ It will come one day for you A light in your life will shine through maybe not tomorrow or the next Your emotions also may be put to test I'm sure in time though a new love will be yours For you in time a new love endures love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love it! Great to read positive poems, they give the spirit a lift. Well done Lone Wolf! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
We have to have those dreams of tomorrow just to keep us going.  |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~LW,...Even when I just read the title,...oh,...I loved it...hope....so good to hold onto. I am so glad that you wrote this poem. It's excellent...and soooo true. I am here to climb the slope with you. Really. I know I haven't been in this room lately but it's so difficult to stay on top of everybody's work,...and I want to read it all, it was just getting tough to stay on top...I needed a lil break. Again,...I am so happy that you see that the future is full of promise and hope. Huge hug and smile for you  . Take care. *Peace. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Nice poem.....and yes happiness will come when you don't know it, it will sneak up on you.....many people are happy and don't even know it! for if they were not or had none they would surely die!!! Liked this poem very much..... Julie :) |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Great work L.W. We all need to climb that slope occasionally, and look back to where we've been and up to where we want to go, the top seems more inviting. Keep climbing, its worth every step. Olias |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice written!!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Whiskey....Thank you. Amy....Happy to make you smile, you are welcome my friend. Thank you for the reply. You take care too. Tracie....I know it will and yes there will be tests. Thank you very much for the verses. Very sweet of you. ethome....Thank you, do not write many positive ones, but I have hope for the future. It will be whatever I make it. Poet deVine....Yes, we all do!! SF....I knew you would love it my dear friend. I also know you will be there with me every step of the way. We can do it together....I believe. Huge hug and smile right back to you!! Thank you.Julie Ann....Thank you very much. Yes, it always seems to sneak up on us. Happy you liked it.Olias....I will persevere do not worry. I know it will be more than worth it. Thanks. vandana....thank you. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
As usual, a great poem penned by you. I love the lines: "There warm sunshine will abound perhaps happiness will again be found somewhere on the other side of sorrow my thoughts are filled with dreams of tomorrow." An uplifting poem, my friend. Your poem, like life itself gives us two sides of the spectrum, experiencing both happiness and sorrow. If only, everyone could read this for inspiration I leave you with this quote that my Aunt Jenny once said, "Remember too the sorrow, for it shall so enrichen the happiness and make for a memory complete." Reading your poem reminded me instantly of what she had said to me. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
heres to sunshine dreams and new horizons LW.. reach for the stars...kiss the moon  love ya jm " no more tears left to hide ... we have made it thru a long and lonely night, better days ... are on our side well it looks as though we doing something right." ~Melissa Manchester~ |
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Silkdragon Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 65 |
I enjoyed your poem a lot. Keep it up! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Somewhere on the other side of sorrow" I particularly enjoyed this line, Lone Wolf. Do keep writing for us and you... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Lone Wolf, You know I love that BIG BRIGHT SUNSHINE GRAPHIC after all my motto is TOMORROW IS A BRIGHTER DAY!!! Great poem by the way All my love, Jeffrey |
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VampDude Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 21Canada |
LW.. Amazing work, I came back and this was the first thing I read.. Im always enchanted by your work.. great poem! "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters" -Metallica- |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa . . . Thank you very much for the reply. Yes, I do try to see both sides of things. Thanks for sharing the quote, she sounds like a wise woman. JM . . . Cheers to that one!! Wishing you the same my friend. Love ya too. Silkdragon . . . Thanks, no intentions to stop now!! Claire . . . Me too. I will keep writing for me mostly, but I will share it with all of you too. Jeffrey . . . I knew you'd like that!! LOL...yes, I know the motto well. Thanks!! VampDude . . . Welcome back!! Thanks for reading. Wow...enchanted...nice. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderfully postitive and uplifting poem Lone Wolf ... lovely flow and very well penned indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done, Lone Wolf! Never give up that hope! Denise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kit . . . Thank you. I felt that way when I write it. Denise . . . Never will give them up!! Thanks!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i do love you work and i really like this one set aside from the rest. the idea great and expression greater love it. keep looking at tomrrow I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sweet LoneWolf~ Tomorrow will shine brighter ... that's a promise. *HUGS* gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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AMaZing Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 10 |
Very uplifting poem....EXCELLENT work!! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful, hope-filled piece. It really touched me. Thank you for sharing it with us. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeremiah . . . Happy to hear you love my work! Thank you for the reply. I will always look to tomorrow. Marge . . . I know it will be brighter!! *HUGS* back my friend. Amazing . . . Thank you very much! LoveBug . . . You are welcome. Happy to touch someone with my words. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
soul-stirrying and heart expanding |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Keep on smiling Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lone Wolf, my friend... this piece slipped by me the first time through, but I'm pleased to have found this part of you... for many reasons I will sigh too many here to list just why... but you indeed have struck a chord and like sunlight to Arthur's sword your soul shines in this piece and I will pray your writing never cease... yes, can you tell, I like it??? Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Lone Wolf, My dear, I really love this! I, too, try to find the best I can in the thought of tomorrow. For, as i have been told, tommorrow is only what we make of it ourselves! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Somewhere on the other side of sorrow my dreams are filled with the hopes of tomorrow." Loved reading this poem...it seems that way sometimes that there is an order of arrangement...there is a time for love and a time for sorrow and then a time for new hope that leads to a beautiful tomorrow...James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Prometheus . . . Thank you!! Eric . . . I'll never stop. Sunshine . . . My friend, I am pleased you found it too. And that you liked it. Do not worry, I will always write. I can tell you did!! Terry . . . Glad to hear it and yes we can make it anything we want!! Love ya too.James . . . I believe there is order to all things too. I knew you would like it if you read it for some reason. Thank you!! Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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