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Slashed soul
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 86
England

0 posted 2000-06-23 08:55 PM


I dont want to be your victim
I'm tired of your blame
feelings in  my heart have changed
no longer shackled with your chains
beyond the fingers of pain.

Yet the love lives inside me
burning brightly regardless of fault
I kept our love in a strong vault
beyond hurt, above loss
I need you Kirsty
beyond my cost

Willing to change my life
to hold you forever more
just walk back through the door
let me into your dreams oncemore

I have suffered
I feel your pain
give me the chance to take it away
no-one makes me feel like you do
I shout out aloud
I LOVE YOU.........

Rich
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Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
1 posted 2000-06-23 09:57 PM


Wow... it sounds like she really means a lot to you.  Hopefully it will all work out in the end.  Great poem!

"Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*

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