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Aimster
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0 posted 2000-06-23 07:57 PM



All Night Long
Amy M. Kennedy

Close the door baby
The rest of the world out of sight
Consumed by the fire
Flames of passion ignite

You stare into my eyes
As I softly caress your face
Running my fingers through your hair
Our kisses pick up pace

All night long
I could stay like this
Forever wrapped in your loving arms
Seduced by your sweet kiss

Flames of heat
Start burning stronger
And we start to lose control
Unable to hold back any longer

It’s summer time now
And the heat is intense
I’ve been in love before
But it never felt like this

Love me right now
Love me for always
And I promise you
By your side I will forever stay

You have the key
That goes to my heart of hearts
Our eyes lock again
And once more the passion starts

Unable to resist
Our attraction is so true
In soft candle light
We sweetly make love, me and you.


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[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-23-2000).]

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-06-23 08:02 PM


Amy, this is just beautiful. I especially liked the first verse.

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



Honeybee
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2 posted 2000-06-23 08:21 PM


~Amy~

You go girl, this is hot!  Such passion in your words, as always very well written!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-06-23 09:26 PM


WOW
WHEW...
me thinks me eyebrows got singed reading this
passionate and sensual jewel!!
WONDERFUL writing amy-girl...
love seeing you explore this side of your
writing...
better be careful your poets pen is SMOKING    
later-lover-gator
jm

Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2000-06-23 09:31 PM


Amy,

Passion at it's best!!!  So full of feeling and warmth.  Hope it is all working out for you my friend.  

Great writing.

LW


Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith


Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2000-06-23 09:44 PM


Wow Amy ... passionate, powerful, and so moving ... beautiful writing! (sounds like a keeper he does)  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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6 posted 2000-06-23 09:56 PM


Amy~
Beautifully done.

'I’ve been in love before
But it never felt like this'

~*Marge*~


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Aimster
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7 posted 2000-06-24 01:26 AM


thank you all for you kind
comments. as always, they are
most appreciative!

love ya,
Amy  

"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




vandana
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8 posted 2000-06-25 06:05 PM


Lovely poem!!!!!
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9 posted 2000-06-25 07:07 PM


wow, I loved it!!!!!!!!!
great expressions in it.

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