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redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
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0 posted 2000-06-23 05:15 PM


Sewing the
sea deep gold.
The charmed archer,
weaver of white
rays,
surfaced
to sleep.

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2000-06-23 05:37 PM


without a doubt, you use the most enigmatic imagery...and it works...surfaced to sleep...

magical incantations---

redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
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2 posted 2000-06-23 10:46 PM


even though, you might not now all that i'm saying, i think over all you do, all your replys are harbored in the same view, of my intake and on put of paper,
your words also grow and twin together, making a plant with many diffrent depths, but on the same plant. if love your form,
does there be ashes rather than flame?
kindly,
redheart angrybraids

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