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OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

0 posted 2000-06-23 08:57 AM


One Night Stand

Idle chat abounds,
Eyes meet, needs unfold, lust swells,
Regrets at dawns break.

Olias


© Copyright 2000 Mick Yates - All Rights Reserved
RHONDA BROYLES
New Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 9

1 posted 2000-06-23 09:01 AM


HEY YOU GOT RIGHT DOWN TO THE POINT . THAT IS EXACTLY HOW IT HAPPENS SOMETIMES


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-06-23 09:11 AM


cool poem Olias..
not always regret tho  
take care, jm

It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
(How one move just puts me by myself)
There you go just trusting someone else
(Now I know I put us both through hell) ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
(I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me)
And I'm not sayin
(We ever had the right to hold on)
(I just didn't wanna let you get away from me)
~MB20~

She says baby,
It's 3AM ... I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it.
~MB20~


Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-06-23 09:44 AM


They do happen quick and then it is gone; or is it? The regret:  I am not sure that is always the case.  There are times the safety of a stranger is much needed.  Enjoyed!
OLIAS
Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
4 posted 2000-06-23 11:53 AM


J.M. Saucy....(lol) Point well taken, maybe I just need more practice (lol). thanks for the comment it brought me back to earth.

M.B. You may be right Mark but I always go with the eagles number "Wasted time", "You don't care much for a strangers touch cause you cant hold your man", (or in my case woman lol) Thanks for posting take care.

Olias

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