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RHONDA BROYLES
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since 2000-06-23
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0 posted 2000-06-23 08:45 AM




What is love? Is it something that blinds you in the night therefore to steal your lonely heart, a heart that has never known true love? Some say lifes love is a tragedy. Some say you can love and be loved again. As for me I feel in my heart I have never known true love. The kind of true love that you dream of having someday. The kind of love that makes your heart flutter and do tricks or the kind that make your eyes sparkle and dance. The kind of love that adds a certain glow to your face. Maybe someday Ill find that kind of love. As for now Ill relax and finish wishing and dreamin for my love to come to me.  



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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2000-06-23 10:53 AM


i really liked this piece! it was
fairly simple yet makes the reader
think, at least that's what it did for
me. thanks much for sharing.
take care.
amy  

"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




notlikely2
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since 2000-06-16
Posts 308
UK
2 posted 2000-06-23 10:56 AM


I felt like this..and gave up hope of ever finding true love....then it found me!
I do hope that the same thing happens for you.
One day peerhaps,,,when you least expect it....meanwhile keep dreaming.

Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you!

vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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3 posted 2000-06-23 11:10 AM


I like it a lot!!!!!! Welcome to Passion!!!!!!!! Nice poem!!!!
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