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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2000-06-23 06:35 AM


Sun cook egg on blacktop
box in window speak two words
"High Cool"

© Copyright 2000 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
angelswing
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1 posted 2000-06-23 06:40 AM


A baffeling poem, It is quite difficult to understand, but short and sweet, I shall have to think hard about the meaning of that one and reply again once I know what it's about, any clues ?
L.of.L. Tom .


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Nurse Crachet
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2 posted 2000-06-23 11:03 AM


I see it as a haiku about it being hot and steamy outside, so there's no choice but to run that air conditioner in the window at the position of High Cool.

Doc, nice poem quite creative, now get back to the Stute before I go crazy.

Meadowmuse
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3 posted 2000-06-23 11:06 AM


ku, very ku...

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Mike
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4 posted 2000-06-23 11:37 AM


Yep... one of those days here also...
OLIAS
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5 posted 2000-06-23 02:41 PM


Very clever  

Thanks for making me smile

Olias

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6 posted 2000-06-23 07:01 PM


Dr~
This is just 'tu-kul' !
How very clever of you.
Florida FINALLY has some glorious rain !
Loving it here right now !
Again ... this is really clever !
~*Marge*


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Denise
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7 posted 2000-06-23 08:35 PM


Cool!  

Denise

Dr.Moose1
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8 posted 2000-06-24 10:50 PM


angelswing,Nurse C.,MM,Mike,Olias,Marge,d.,
Thank you all for the r&r's !
'Tis a cool wind indeed , that blew your comments this way .
Doc

jennie may*
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9 posted 2000-06-24 11:13 PM


Sweet!  It's like 800 degrees here in ohio, so I can relate.  solution: $400 air conditioner.       heheh   nice poem.
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