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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Dream Master " As day is lost into darkness You arise to stand and watch As to sleep my eyes flood Deep in the shadow you wait there for me Watching me sleeping feeling my dreams Not knowing of what I am seeing Admiring me from afar my being My dream master keeping me safe As along I sleep awaiting awake In the morn you'll be gone Sun inflood the dawn Dividing the night into day Off to your land to sleep await Then blue is upon the sky Life back into my eyes I awake to a day new No memory held of you Till night, no longer day Then by my side obey My dream master, keep me safe [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 06-24-2000).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Nice poem, reading it was an enjoyable experience, not only are you very pretty, but your a great poet to, you have a lot going for you . Your poem has a lot of deep underlying meaning . Thanks . L.of.L. Tom .   Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Little Whiskey Gal~ This is such a lovely poem. The thoughts are so soft and tender. I really like it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks Tom for your kind words And thanks Marge For your reply |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~whiskey i am quickly becoming a fan of yours! this was excellent. i loved the flow of it and the entire message behind it. great work! take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks everyone for your kind replies,Thanks Marge for the email |
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